no
just plain no.
first off: uke gets his arm cut off in episode V and darth vader's face is seen in episode VI and you stated this was ep IV.
2: the lightsabers were horrible, you might wanna lok around the forum for tutorials.
3: the graphics were poor.
the music didnt have anything to do with star wars ( it has such an awesome soundtrack why replace it??)
and i was a plain intro.
WORK HARDER!!!!
Peace